Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 3 and my teacher is Miss Esselink. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 11 November 2020
Malh saves the day
Once upon a time a long time ago there was a king he had four sons the oldest was handsomest the twins were the ugliest and the youngest looked like he was the oldest And actually was the strongest all the girls in the kingdom Had a crush on the youngest. but one girl Did not. The girl's name was Mulh. She is the sweetest and prettiest in the whole Kingdom but she doesn't think he looks cute at all. King said to the Sons He would split the kingdom into 4 Pieces and they would Each rule 1 quarter of the Kingdom but the youngest disagreed. That night He followed a trail into The woods until he came to a Witches Cottage. he went inside And asked the witch who lived inside to give him a spell to change his fate forever and the witch said yes but the spell turn come in to a bear he destroys his kingdom the whole Kingdom died so malh stopped him before could reach the Palace. She went to the Witch's Cottage and broke the spell and they got married. the end.
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Kia ora Willa,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful story, I especially like when the girl went to the witches cottage. This story reminded me a bit of a movie I watched where the mom got turned into a bear, I think it was called Brave.
One thing I would recommend you do to help you audience is to change the font colour as yellow is really hard to read.
What happened once they got married?
Keep up the great blogging,
Mark - the Cybersmart Guy
it was based on brave
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