Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 3 and my teacher is Miss Esselink. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 23 August 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Willa, You have written a great fear description. I love all the simile's you have used. My favourite is "red like the flames of a demon". Don't forget to add a WALT or a small description on what you are learning.
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